With the increasing use of and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people use to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
The 21st century has shown the significant development of technology along with the increase in users, this proof that machines are now can replace people and do work which people used to perform. The following essay takes a look at both sides of the argument.
On the one hand, the advantages of using machines possibly reduce the risk rating and develop new types of jobs. Firstly, some jobs are related to damage respiratory such as firefighter or builder should be replaced by robots. These may decrease the proportion of cancer and diseases in terms of the lung. This way, people can’t concern about their health system and the cost relating to insurance can be depleted. In addition, with some fields regard to science or medication, robots can do better than humans to some degree such as calculate speed or researching. Secondly, for countries that don’t have a large number of citizens, robots can be a great method for replacing people but can still develop economies.
On the other hand, there is no doubt that if robots can alter people in all fields, there would be a bad perspective on the world. Firstly, people can easily lose their job and no more having a high salary. People will be worried, but in terms of money and manufacturing, it will be a plus for companies. Secondly, Stephen Hawking warned that if people control robots in wrong ways and let robots can upgrade by themselves that people can’t catch up, it would be a disaster, by having stunning wisdom perhaps robots can dominate the world and enslave humans someday.
In conclusion, if people want to use robots to alter people work, they need to manage and control it effectively unless it would be counterproductive and may lead to some dangerous issue
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 606, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...Secondly, for countries that don’t have a large number of citizens, robots can be a great method ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, in addition, in conclusion, no doubt, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85906040268 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61231642575 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580536912752 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 446.4 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.2719429078 49.4020404114 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.384615385 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9230769231 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92307692308 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214958890059 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0827847383139 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.125949025835 0.0667982634062 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172582808739 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129830152361 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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