With the increasing use of and development of new technology, many machines are now able to do the work which people use to perform. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
Thanks to rapid developments in novel technology, many machines working on-site have proven to achieve better performance results with greater efficiency than human workers can. This trend of automation provides huge benefits to the industrial production line and many means of transportation, but it also contains a few underlying consequences.
For the first of advantages, factories use automated machines in the majority of the production line mainly because these machines can complete an assigned task repeatedly and constantly. In addition, machines can perform their tasks with great efficiency, high precision, and can recognize faults that the unaided eye can’t see. With the correctly programmed tasks, these robots can produce high-quality products in a significantly short amount of time. Secondly, the advent of self-driving cars has once again proven that robots work better than humans do. Although in testing, modern autonomous vehicles employ state-of-the-art technology to transport their passengers safely to their destinations. Benefits in industry and transportation are just two of the wide range of applications of automation.
Despite these positives, implementing modern machines can pose negative changes, which includes the loss of jobs. For example, although having more machines in factories is useful, this could cause thousands of workers to lose their current jobs because machines are undeniably more effective. Moreover, artificial intelligence is gradually replacing the services industry and education. This threatens the role of teachers and waiters at restaurants in the near future.
In conclusion, modern machines assist the development of industries as much as they damage the workforce.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 265, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun means seems to be countable; consider using: 'many means'.
Suggestion: many means
...s to the industrial production line and many means of transportation, but it also contains...
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Line 3, column 355, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'services'' or 'service's'?
Suggestion: services'; service's
...intelligence is gradually replacing the services industry and education. This threatens ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1487.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.90079365079 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13716766968 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662698412698 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7319405203 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.384615385 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3846153846 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.84615384615 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194918185213 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0581063849184 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0404589611689 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112415812905 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0393586158647 0.056905535591 69% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.94 12.4159519038 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.72 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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