Individual can do nothing to help improve the environment only. Government and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
It is certainly true that the issues related to environmental pollution have become one of the most controversial issues nowadays, every nation is wondering about how to tackle the problem. However, people have different view about improve environment. Many people argue that this is only responsibility of individuals, but other say that government and large companies can maintain this problem. Personally, I agree that individuals as well as government and large companies are equally responsible for this environmental problem. This essay will be analyzed with reasonable example.
To begin with, why many people think that individuals can do to manage environmental problem because, people can change of their transportation. It can be seen that if people can more prefer to use of bicycle and walk for shorter distance, which cannot create pollution and maintain environment. Secondly, people can stop to use of plastic bag for their daily shopping and use paper bag. Plastic is one of the product which create more pollution and non-biodegradable product due to that paper bag is very convenient for carry shopping product.
On the flip side of coin, Government and large companies can also try to maintain environment. First of all, large companies should arrange company's bus for their worker because nowadays people mostly prefer to travel their own personal vehicles. Large companies should apply this transportation, which can help to reduce air pollution. Apart from this, Government should start to campaign for awareness regarding this environmental problem. For example, Government of America started this campaign around 10 years ago and nowadays people can see America is one of the cleanest city in the world.
In recapitulation, Environmental problem not only solved by individual person but government and large companies are equally responsible to maintain environment problem though campaign regarding this problem and transport facility should be applied by large companies.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, apart from, for example, as well as, first of all, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54248366013 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04559033487 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.516339869281 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1644408471 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.066666667 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.93333333333 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240750754124 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947752517977 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688849111178 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150240811356 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.016531871287 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.85 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.98 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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