Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only government and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
During recent years, evironmental problems and how to solve it has become one passionate topic. There are some people express an idea that only government and large companies can significantly improve the situation, rather than individuals. To a large extent, I disapprove this point of view.
It is undeniable that environmental problems can only be solved with the co-operation between the state and the citizens. Authorities play a major part by making policies about preserving and improving environment. Some of possible policies are taxing vehicles which emit extensive toxic gas, or fining people harshly for littering. Also, they can provide education in schools and local areas about what to do in favor of preserving the environment. Large companies, who are willing to protect the nature, can follow the law, and invest in projects of creating eco-friendly products along with the governments.
Aside from that, the residents can contribute eagerly in these improving process by obeying the rules of the state. It is essential that people to follow goverment requirements in terms of strictly and orderly protect the nature. For example, people can take the initiative in adjusting daily habits of waste disposal to protect the environment, such as following the three R's principle and using environmentally-friendly products as much as possible. Besides that, citizens can raise funds for afforestation, arrange days of garbage collecting and sorting, planting days or meetings of sharing methods of making environment better in local regions.
In sum up, improving the environment is a job not only for the government and large company, but also for individuals to deal with. Since environmental issue affects everyone's lives, it is not solely someone's responsibility. It is important that people needs to be aware of the problems and unite with the authorities in solving those issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, so, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42760942761 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16146376429 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609427609428 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.8588899615 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.466666667 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 7.06120827912 45% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259859260994 0.244688304435 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0769981187548 0.084324248473 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0701135751782 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149315074178 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0378869291689 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.42 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.