Individual can do nothing to improve the environment; only government and large companies can make a difference. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
A topic related to the environment never fails to attract public attention. Pollution in big cities already crossed danger level and is impacting the public's health. Many people believe that the government and reputed organization can get success to clean the environment. However, I personally believe that small steps take by citizen individually also make a significant difference.
Nowadays, government incorporation is necessary to handle environmental issues effectively. This is because of the law declared by the government to restrain pollution compels people or industries to prevent themselves to spread of pollution. For example, the government of Delhi had lunched odd-even scheme to control pollution in the city. As per the sources, It was very successful because of a scheme launched by the government and people did not want to pay the hefty fine by breaking the rule. Same as government involvement, big organizations are responsible to make environment problem worse. Their limitless production using fossil and chemicals generate poisonous gases in the air. So, It is their moral obligation to clean the environment by organizing tree plantation etc.
on other hands, single contribution to saving the environment never waste. keep our surrounding clean and pollution free is a small but vital step towards environment protection. For example, one can contribute to society by planting a tree in an open area of the house or used bicycle for short communication which may inspire others to do same. Next, Big NGO's or social groups usually started with one or two people only. These groups inform good and bad of environments to local inhabitants.
In conclusion, Although the government can have more influence on the public for the clean environment, I said it is a responsibility of each people of the country. It can be very difficult to maintain a clean environment.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'publics'' or 'public's'?
Suggestion: publics'; public's
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: On
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 32.0 8.3376753507 384% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.33333333333 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15181781763 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.603333333333 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 504.9 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.6800803904 49.4020404114 66% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.8888888889 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.6666666667 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.27777777778 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159326018922 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0465446775298 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520518580846 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103731743178 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0420672701841 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.