Individual greed and selfishness have been the basis of modern society. Some people think that we must return to the older and more traditional values of respect for the family and the local community in order to create a better world to live in. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Modernity has left an inferior impression on human characteristics. Presently, the self centred and materialistic attitude of people is the predominant reason behind the foundation of worse life. It is well acknowledged that "a person that value it's privileges over its principles soon losts both. Therefore , I am completely agree with the folks opinion that we must diverse to golden memories to fabricate the pleasant world.
To commence with , the role of returning to past is terrafic in order to make the young bees more obedient, sincere and generous. Moreover,youngsters will expected to become extrovert on account of installing moral, social and cultural ethics among them. To elucidate, people with good etiquettes would like to communicate with community members and share their ideas, feeling and thoughts on the commemoration of any special occasion. Consequently, the idea of diverting to ancient time is stupendous to emerge the sense of affinity, intimacy and fraternity.
Further emphasizing on my point of you. Initially, alike to past, telling cultural, historical and inspirational stories to juveniles by their guardians contribute more to make them noble character. Adding to it, conforming to past, grey-headed generation should inculcate cultural and traditional values among offsprings which might help them to deep-rooted with their tradition and lead a prosperous life. It is apparently seen that, the idea of going to former time have big bag of merits for mankind.
To recapitulate, life without having harmonious bonding with family and community like "a flower without fragrance". However, I still believe that people should have affinity and intimacy with others in order to set the foundation of blissful life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, consequently, however, if, moreover, so, still, therefore, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.59328358209 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16665800302 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.5757040001 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.071428571 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1428571429 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.71428571429 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.139725237047 0.244688304435 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0403917971303 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0282253946829 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0788224922833 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0135045456828 0.056905535591 24% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.14 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.82 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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