Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
Please give me an advice ;)
In this day and age, many people claimed that individuals can not help environment to be improved but institutions and large firms are able to address this task much better.In my view, i totally disagree with this statement by the reasons be
First of all, it is evident that individuals is a part of society.Hence, they play an important role and contribute to protect environment. For example, in 2000, the statistic showed that China was always demanding an accurate plan to deal with environmental problems but no longer were abolished because the governments ignored all citizens' opinions. Although institution' views are more accuracy, skipping all of the civilians' point of views is never be a good step to cope with environmental issues significantly.
Another fundermental reason is that each citizens nowadays directly live in contamminated settings so they definitely have a voice in dealing heated global problems. To examplify, in 2003, India has made a conference discussing about tackling seriorsly air pollution in a decade without any votes of each other civilians cause they suspected about lower knowledge of the dweller.As a result, India was considered as the highest polluted country in 2004.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, hence, if, so, well, for example, as a result, first of all, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1027.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 193.0 315.596192385 61% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.32124352332 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07159069329 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.715025906736 0.561755894193 127% => OK
syllable_count: 325.8 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 38.0 20.2975951904 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 84.0476055578 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 205.4 106.682146367 193% => OK
Words per sentence: 38.6 20.7667163134 186% => OK
Discourse Markers: 16.6 7.06120827912 235% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0883381725192 0.244688304435 36% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.037536759806 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0375163689058 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0588703318831 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407008628475 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.9 13.0946893788 175% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 24.45 50.2224549098 49% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.3 11.3001002004 171% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.76 8.58950901804 125% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 17.2 10.1190380762 170% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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