Due to the advance of capitalism and the massive cosume trend, big companies are enccouraged to produce a variety of wastes without the supervision of the goverments. This situation, affects the enviroment, creating huge problems around the planet. However, In my opinion, individuals could make a big difference changing some consume habits and daily rutines.
As I mentioned in the fisrt paragraph, a great and usefool tool that people could use against the problems generated by organization's wastes, is to change some consume habits. It is not a secret that the main aim of a company is to sell their products or services. Therefore, the invidivuals have the power to indirectly decide what a company comercialices, in other words, without consumption there is no product. Let take as an example the situation with the plastic bags on markets, As a result of a trend started few years ago about not using it, the owners of different shops deciced to avoid it.
Secondly, another easy way to not contribute whit the environment destruction is changing some daily rutines. One of the most critical situations in our planet is the waste of non-renewable resourses. Mainly, the exccesive consume of water that creates problems as global warming and more. Althought this, the people still wasting this resourse wihtout any concern, therefore, changing some daily rutines as avoids clean the car every day or take long showers, will make a big difference
To conclude, and for all the aforamentioned argumets, althought the companies and goverments could make a huge difference on the take care of the enviroment, individuals also have some extremedly usefool tools.
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- Some educational systems make students study specialised subjects from the age of fifteen while others require students to study a wide range Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 408, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...herefore, changing some daily rutines as avoids clean the car every day or take l...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93854755422 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.607407407407 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 90.4889381852 49.4020404114 183% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.636363636 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.5454545455 20.7667163134 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.63636363636 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0970098081321 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0325644497799 0.084324248473 39% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0327334727041 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0656522150904 0.151304729494 43% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0221345048343 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.18 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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