Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
Nowaday, with the increasing of our demand life, the reponsibility for saving and improving the enviroment is becoming a hot potatoe in the world. so many people hold the opinion that individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference. While, personally, i think that all of us have to be reponsible for saving enviroment, so i don't agree with that atitude.
On the one hand, not only governments and large companies can make a difference, individuals also can be a greener or enviromentalist. For example, we can use products made from eco-friendly source and can also be recycle as much as possible in order to decrease the waste and rubbish. In addtion, instead of taking flights or private vehicles to travel, we can use public transports like bus or train.
On the other hand, governments and large companies also have misson about saving enviroment. they have to have more many "green" projects.so, i think that goverments and companies should be strict to propose effective methods, laws to limit the emission from factories, encourage or popularize for all people about the importance of saving enviroment, and also protect the nature are and wild animal. Especially, for the companies, they should use and invest renewable relevant energy source or material like solar energy, wind energy,..
Overall, we all know that the power of community has a big influncing ,so if we want to improve the enviroment , individuals and goverments, large companies have to co-oparate with each other to propose the general solution, attemp together to protect the enviroments
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 148, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: So
...is becoming a hot potatoe in the world. so many people hold the opinion that indiv...
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Line 1, column 319, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...n make a difference. While, personally, i think that all of us have to be reponsi...
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Line 1, column 392, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
... reponsible for saving enviroment, so i dont agree with that atitude. On the one ...
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: They
...so have misson about saving enviroment. they have to have more many 'green&apos...
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Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...ore many 'green' projects.so, i think that goverments and companies sho...
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Suggestion: , .
... material like solar energy, wind energy,.. Overall, we all know that the power...
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Message: Two consecutive dots
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...material like solar energy, wind energy,.. Overall, we all know that the power ...
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Line 7, column 70, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... power of community has a big influncing ,so if we want to improve the enviroment ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...,so if we want to improve the enviroment , individuals and goverments, large compa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, while, for example, i think, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1386.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23018867925 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07837583172 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550943396226 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 67.6150870738 49.4020404114 137% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.6 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.5 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331140321917 0.244688304435 135% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.155371457866 0.084324248473 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.197782763498 0.0667982634062 296% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.200851334989 0.151304729494 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122960300763 0.056905535591 216% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.