Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
The topic under discussion is individuals can do nothing to improve the environment, only government and large companies can make a difference. According to me I feel that every individual who is a responsible citizen of this country should contribute themselves for he betterment of the environment.
although government is planning various programs to make the environment neat and clean. Unless we citizens do something productive that can not be done to the full extent. For instance government of India has introduced a program called Swach Bharath and in this although the government brings various schemes it is the duty of individuals to respect the decision and give their helping hand out.
Now a days large companies and big industries are also taking all the required measures that will not increase any pollution and they are also concentrating on the preventive measures of how o control the industry waste and also how to reuse it by recycling them.
All in all I would say environment is like a gift given to us by god and so it is everyone's duty to protect it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 145, Rule ID: ACCORDING_TO_ME[1]
Message: This phrase can sound awkward in English. Consider using 'in my opinion' or 'I think'.
Suggestion: In my opinion; I think
... large companies can make a difference. According to me I feel that every individual who is a r...
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Line 1, column 264, Rule ID: HE_THE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'for the betterment'?
Suggestion: for the betterment
...is country should contribute themselves for he betterment of the environment. although gover...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Although
... he betterment of the environment. although government is planning various programs...
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Line 5, column 90, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Unless” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...to make the environment neat and clean. Unless we citizens do something productive tha...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: NOW_A_DAYS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'nowadays'?
Suggestion: Nowadays
...n and give their helping hand out. Now a days large companies and big industries are ...
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Line 9, column 5, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a day' or simply 'days'?
Suggestion: a day; days
...d give their helping hand out. Now a days large companies and big industries are ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for instance, i feel
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 41.998997996 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 910.0 1615.20841683 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 183.0 315.596192385 58% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97267759563 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67800887145 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96989382675 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628415300546 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 287.1 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 63.4008948627 49.4020404114 128% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.0 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.1428571429 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314156748868 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150232073956 0.084324248473 178% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.207003660061 0.0667982634062 310% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.160348890275 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.17252487439 0.056905535591 303% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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