Individuals can do nothing to improve the environment; only governments and large companies can make a difference.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
A suitable environment is an essential need for any creature to live peacefully. If we say that we make our environment and we ourselves can save this with different protective methods, then it will not fruitful without the intervention of the government and large companies. I would agree with this statement to some extent because it has some reasons.
First of all, modern life preferences are becoming strong in surroundings. People buy those things which fascinate them or they see them on commercials or on social media. Therefore, authority and big firms should also give the message of a safe environment with their products. In this way, the public will have awareness about their surrounding and they will definitely follow the instruction of their favorite product.
On the other side, the government should ban those things which are destroying the natural environment and will create a severe impact on the future generation. For instance, chemical emission by companies and plastic bags usage are continuously creating air and water pollution. These pollutions are causing different diseases among humans and different species of the earth. The government can also charge the fine against them so that this fine can be used to reinstall the natural environment again.
To sum up the arguments, government and large companies can play the main role to protect, safe and improve the environment because they have more excess to large populations as compared to individuals. Individual can only save the environment from which one`s is surrounded. One thing that an individual can do, is to educate and help the people to improve the situation and work in a team.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, then, therefore, for instance, first of all, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1411.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1875 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88476930152 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.591911764706 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6117128978 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.785714286 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4285714286 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35714285714 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.309684321466 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0876459362198 0.084324248473 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796667585811 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17392117419 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.120321276737 0.056905535591 211% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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