Universities should accept equal numbers of male and female students in every subject.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Every gender should get the equal opportunity to attain the higher education at university level. This equality brings the encouragement in both genders and enhance the creativity but sometimes male and female interests are different, therefore it would not be fair to has equal ratio of male and female at higher education level. According to my point of view, equal portions are not good idea due to some reasons.
Firstly, population ratio in every country is not balanced between male and female and, heads of the household are mostly males, therefore it would be injustice if male and female were got same education. Females have to handle work inside the house, whereas male deals the outside activities, this is why they should get education according to their priorities. For example, female should good at management skills and males should be good at logical and technical skills.
Secondly, interests and nature differ between men and women, as men always take interest in engineering, mathematics and science, on the other hand females take interest in art, music and literature. Moreover, according to research, it is defined that male can preform signal task better than female, however they are good at multitasking, such as males are good drivers because they have deep focus.
Contrast to this, if every gender was gotten equal chance then it would be created the innovation in every field. As we know that brain structure of male and female is different and, they think differently. In this way, every gender brings more innovation in research related education.
To sum up the arguments, balanced division between male and female for higher studies is not recommend because drawbacks overlap their benefits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 270, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'have'.
Suggestion: have
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Line 5, column 94, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'recommended'.
Suggestion: recommended
...le and female for higher studies is not recommend because drawbacks overlap their benefit...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, whereas, for example, such as, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 280.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18928571429 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09062348924 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60521210308 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.0455863216 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3333333333 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8333333333 7.06120827912 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221170239918 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902636751475 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0470645046349 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125059891844 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606047613203 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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