Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increases the crime and violence in the society. TO what extent do you agree or disagree,give your own opinion?
With feeling of insecurity of the individual, a debate has developed whether person should carry the weapons in order to protect by self or they should not allowed to use of guns because it would produce violence and crime rate will escalate significantly. Here, I firmly believe that the given ideology is correct in contemporary word. In addition, for the sake of my opinion I will discuss some malicious effect of defence gadgets and my point of view.
There manifolds points that shore up my opinion. First and foremost, With the hectic schedule and high workload of individuals life become the very stressful, if higher authority allowed to use of weapons then, people use of it in every sectors in order to satisfy their desire, it may be with right or wrong intense. Since cases of rape and murder are substantially increases as compare to last decade, because of there is no strict curbs on guns. For example, In USA crime rate has been increased almost 30 percent as compare to last decade, owing to allowed civilian weapon authorisation. Thus, by the virtue of this we can say that weapons stir up the crime rate so, it is beneficial to controls on it.
Further emphasising on my point of view, terrorism is a global problem of the world. If government allows the access of guns then it might be possible some snippercells provides this weapons on wrong hand. Moreover, today terrorist have advanced warfare ammo without any license so, it would possible they achieve this gun in order to they will take the help of crime. For instance, Indian government allowed use of weapons in Kashmir for self protection but, people sell this weapons to terrorist for money. Although this weapons are not advanced, that weapons kills easily with one trigger. Hence, on the heels of this evidence the use of weapons must be controlled for the sake of peace and calm.
To conclude, every coin has two sides, the government must allowed to use of weapons for higher officer for protect their self. Also, provide the license with particular validity. But in another side, there are many disadvantage of weapons because of industry of ammo flourished very rapidly with use of it. Thus, undeniably we can say that accessing of weapons increase the crime and violence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, thus, for example, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1882.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 387.0 315.596192385 123% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86304909561 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.43534841618 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56697505816 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529715762274 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 607.5 506.74238477 120% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.032289966 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.555555556 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.44444444444 7.06120827912 77% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134618982657 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0432465910378 0.084324248473 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044030144259 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924416744106 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369594894974 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.23 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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