Individuals should not be allowed to carry guns as it increase the crime and violence in the society. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many people consider that owning private guns should be forbidden because it may lead to a violent society and increasing crime rates. In my opinion, I totally agree with the point that ownership of guns should be strictly controlled.
It is obvious that guns ownership leads to several problems in society. The first and most obvious reason is that everyone easily gains access to guns, and they can obtain guns from their parents or buy them from the internet. For example, there are lots of massive shooting occurred in the United States recently and they result in a number of wound people and death. These events received enormous attention from all over the world and the most surprising fact is that these murderers are just normal students who received guns from home or the internet. Besides, people may lead an anxious life because they have to be aware of their safety at each moment in case someone shoots them. This might cause health problems to people in the long time.
The other reason is that owning and carrying guns may have negative consequences for both children and individuals. For instance, children would not be able to recognize the difference between toy and real guns, so they might cause unnecessary shooting wounds to their family members. In addition, it is shown that suicide rate is on the increase in the area where guns are available. Hence, it seems that guns ownership leads to various negative results.
In conclusion, owning and carrying guns indeed make the society being full of violence and danger. As a result, ownership of guns should be strictly under control in case there would be plenty of incidents resulted from guns owning.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, hence, if, may, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1401.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93309859155 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.37624407534 2.80592935109 85% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55985915493 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5625686813 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.071428571 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2857142857 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.35714285714 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212073925267 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0796150950662 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0653978286867 0.0667982634062 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155827253958 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0767925457373 0.056905535591 135% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.02 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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