Caring for children is probably the most important job in any society. Because of this, all mothers and fathers should be required to take a course that prepares them to be good parents. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
It is argued that both parents should take a course to raise their children and to learn how to be good parents. I, personally, disagree with this point because such courses will bring more unnecessary problems to both parents and children.
It is true that human beings raise their children without any instruction for thousands of years. Therefore, if parents are taught by instructors about how to raise their children with a set of standard operation, it will deter the development of creativity of children. One of the negative consequence is that these kids will have the same thinking pattern and similar characteristics. Such the worse result totally violate the basic principle of the world, which is that everyone is unique and special and no one will have the same thought and personality traits as others. Once these children grow up, they need to work. Therefore, it is detrimental to the whole industries in society because of the lack of creativity of adults.
On the other hand, the other reason for being unnecessary for parents to attend courses is that both parents are too busy to learn. Once they are off duty, they would rather take a rest at home and accompany their children than take these courses. Therefore, the best way to teach children is using parents’ personal experience to shape their children because parents can be more familiar to tackle the problems that their children may have. Also, this would not set the limitation on children’s creativity and hence there would be lots of unique children in the world.
In conclusion, forcing parents to take courses would not bring any benefits to both society and their children and it may be a deterrent to the development of children instead.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, hence, if, may, so, therefore, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1452.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98969072165 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7195529778 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.498281786942 0.561755894193 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.2470183393 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.692307692 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3846153846 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.23076923077 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.220118031337 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0911325829126 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.066155579946 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166777915195 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062289257173 0.056905535591 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.3 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.71 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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