Influence of human beings on the world's ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio-diversity.
What are the primary causes of loss of bio-diversity?
What solutions can you suggest?
The detrimental impact of human living activities in modern day is larger than ever. As a result, not only the survival of hundreds of species but also the bio-diversity are threatened. This essay will examine the causes of the problem as well as suggest feasible measure that can be taken.
The loss of the exuberance of nature mainly boils down to two reasons. Firstly, global warming caused by the enormous amount of carbon footprint from vehicles and factories is undoubtedly responsible. In other words, failing to curb this kind of harmful gas especially in big industrialised cities leads to the increases of temperature on a global scale, which ultimately causes severe destruction to natural habitats via disasters such as floods or wildfires. In West Australia, for instance, the massive fire which broke out suddenly has led to the deaths of over thousands of kangaroos and koala and burnt a huge area of forest . The second reason, linked to the first, is the alarming common action of cutting down trees for cultivation or land for construction in either the countryside or urban areas. Consequently, floods are more likely to occur because unless there are an ample number of trees specifically in rainy areas, water will flow freely and destructively, ruining the whole natural landfield with a diverse population.
Solving the problem entails altering the public’s mindset which can be done via awareness-raising campaigns. Only when each individual is truly understand the precious value and the indespensible role of nature, that has to do with their own existence, will there be positive changes to the environment and natural diversity. For example, the progamme called Nature and Life in England has made profound impact on the country’s citizens and should be expanded globally.
In conclusion, the bio-diversity and the existence of a range of species are recently in limbo, therefore, changing the consciousness of people all over the world about the crisis is critical.
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- In the modern world it is no longer necessary to use animals for food clothing or medicines To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 78
- Influence of human beings on the world s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio diversity What are the primary causes of loss of bio diversity What solutions can you suggest 92
- Influence of human beings on the world s ecosystem is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio diversity What are the primary causes of loss of bio diversity What solutions can you suggest 95
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'understood'.
Suggestion: understood
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, if, second, so, therefore, well, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1682.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23987538941 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98821676768 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638629283489 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 529.2 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.2533040828 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.384615385 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.8461538462 7.06120827912 196% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.178056474889 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.057274408776 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553181895275 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11526630187 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623800229024 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.48 8.58950901804 122% => OK
difficult_words: 115.0 78.4519038076 147% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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