It is said that people nowadays tend to work and study from home thanks to the development of technology, which is available. From my perspective, this development could have positive and negative effects in both equal measure, as now will be discussed.
Working and studying from home can be seen as benificial for several reasons when it provides people with flexibility and convenience. Firstly, because people work at home, the amount of money and time they spend on travelling from home to schools or workplace is reduced significantly. For instance, whether students and workers wake up early or late in the morning, what they need to do is turning on their gadgets and then start a new day. Secondly, learning and working online is a rewarding way to keep the environment green since the amount of perfume emitted from vehicles is declined dramatically. This is such a favorable condition that brings humans betterment of air quality.
Despite the merits mentioned above, I believe that distance working and studying can also be considered as detrimental development to some extent. The main drawback is that this trend may result in a sedentary lifestyle of humanity, from which people have to suffer various health diseases such as heart stroke, obesity and so on. Another drawback is the downward trend of the worldwide economy caused by the fall in the number of commuters and travellers to the tourist destinations.
In conclusion, inspite of some positive effects on the living standard of the citizens, I hold the opinion that this can also trigger adverse effects on the economy and health of them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1350.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05617977528 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79559352921 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.595505617978 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.7762607483 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 122.727272727 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.2727272727 20.7667163134 117% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.63636363636 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247246346484 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0889645035264 0.084324248473 106% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671083652486 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136780948142 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0836382830207 0.056905535591 147% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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