Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities. To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
It is clear that information technology plays a vital part of human life. Nowadays, the general population spends a lot of time for it. By contrast, it may be having a detrimental problem on others. There are a range of various pros and cons with regard to this phenomenon, which I will discuss now.
One of the undisputed advantages of information technology is we can use it to tackle our job easily. For example, we are officers and we need the support of Google, Excel or Word. Another positive aspect is that we feel comfortable broadening our social circle in over the world and do not worried about distance. Furthermore, the social network is a beneficial way to seek information on different topics and it can be incredibly time-consuming.
On the other hand, there are several pitfalls of using the Internet. We are just focused on these websites and ignore their health. This is because we take many times to put attention to it and we do not care about taking regular exercises or go to periodic health examinations. Moreover, we become selfish persons because we no longer focus on being with family and lose interactions in real life. For instance, it can not be denied that most adolescents prefer chatting on the social network than having face-to-face conversations.
To sum up, I think there are arguments for and against the idea of using the Internet on a daily basis. The important thing is to be aware of these issues and use them sensibly for technologies such as: smartphones, laptops or computers.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, moreover, so, for example, for instance, i think, such as, to sum up, with regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1266.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8320610687 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90411618206 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610687022901 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 29.9881458061 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.4 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4666666667 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.33333333333 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126807840661 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0423902748341 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0612994726215 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0769836859476 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0556348691567 0.056905535591 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.44 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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