Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
In the modern day, the trend of developing technology in either urban areas or underprivileged regions has helped citizens to improve their well-being. Although the technological tendency has many drawbacks, it still does more good than harm.
On the one hand, there are some disadvantages of technological products in some ways. Firstly, it is undeniable that people are more likely to suffer from physical issues due to daily using such modern technological devices as laptops or cellphones. For example, people who are over-reliant on using cellphones may not only get a risk of radiation but also possess weaken eye-sights because of blue waves. Secondly, it is attributable to the fact that video games have emerged as indoor activities to let one’s hair down after a stressful day at work or study, but it may render various positive effects if people spend an excessive amount of time in this kind of recreational activities. For instance, children at the school ages should less reliant on video games because it may act as the main factor to lead to a decrease in educational achievements and a rise in the rate of obesity and a shortage of social skills.
On the other hand, technological developments bring about broad-based benefits to a whole host of aspects of human lives. In fact, electronic media has replaced printed newspapers in a wide range of remote areas due to the appearance of the Internet, it plays a vital role for numerous country folks to update information faster than before. Especially, farmers have a reliable source of information to make use of modern cultivation methods in order to improve their productivity which takes steps to poverty alleviation. In addition, such modern technology as a computer connecting the internet would be act as an innovative methodology to tailor teaching styles. For instance, students in remote areas have opportunities to approach a great deal of information on online platforms, which are free of charge or require a small fee.
In conclusion, due to broad-based benefit from information technology, I personally believe that the upside of technological development offsets its downside.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 270, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a are'.
Suggestion: who is a are
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Line 3, column 130, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...host of aspects of human lives. In fact, electronic media has replaced printed ne...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...deal of information on online platforms, which are free of charge or require a sm...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, kind of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1818.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 349.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20916905444 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32221490584 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.11153413124 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 215.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616045845272 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 592.2 506.74238477 117% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0705681814 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.846153846 106.682146367 131% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8461538462 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.3846153846 7.06120827912 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162077717212 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567468547001 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0302504897798 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0992257709783 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0227208307948 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 109.0 78.4519038076 139% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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