Information technology is changing many aspects of our lives and now dominates our home, leisure and work activities.
To what extent do the benefits of information technology outweigh the disadvantages?
Many aspects of our day to day lives has been changed by information technology and is dominating our home, free time and work activities. Although, use of information technology have many advantages in our daily lives including ease of communication and efficient work delivery. But it also have drawbacks such as security issue and dependability. In my opinion, the benefits of information technology is far important then its disadvantages.
The main benefits of information technology is that it is all over us in our lives and is providing us with easy communication and fast work delivery. As technology advances, our lives with it too changes tremendously. We are now able to talk to our friends and family and other people around the world in seconds because of this information technology and we are able to deliver work efficiently. For example, I can call my friend living in the USA within seconds by using this technology. The benefits of using these technologies have positively impacted our lives
On the other hand, The main challenges of information technology is that it comes with security issues and dependency. Adding our personal details in different kinds of websites or devices can be vulnerable and it has made us very much dependent on themselves that we are unable to operate without them in our lives. For instance, in 2017 user bank data was breached by hackers and sold them for millions of dollars on dark web. Information technology have these disadvantages of security issues and dependency that can affect our lives.
In conclusion, Although many parts of our lives are changed because of information technology, and our home, free time and work activities are dominated. Despite the disadvantages of security issues and dependency in information technology, we tends to adopt using it due to its positive aspects of easy communication and efficiency. Lastly, in my point of view, The benefits are ultimately superior then its drawbacks.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 293, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
...nd efficient work delivery. But it also have drawbacks such as security issue and de...
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Line 7, column 245, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[2]
Message: The pronoun 'we' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'tend'
Suggestion: tend
...ependency in information technology, we tends to adopt using it due to its positive a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, second, so, then, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17133956386 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10021598855 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.479750778816 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 550.8 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.3556865423 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.666666667 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.489495545592 0.244688304435 200% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180700491998 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.133713172243 0.0667982634062 200% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.321710357882 0.151304729494 213% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0994391571131 0.056905535591 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.