Innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. However, some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental issues.
Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.
The debate between the individuals who agree with the perception of innovation should primarily focus on profit and economic growth, while others discuss for a focus on addressing social and environmental themes. This essay will claim both perspectives and provide an opinion on the matter.
On one hand, the proponents of innovation are driven by the aspect of earnings and economic growth to gain more profit, and it is essential to lead to advancements that benefit the society as a whole. By the effect of technology into the business environment, utilizing robots and machines instead of humans help companies to reduce employee expenses. In addition to, new innovations can help to peak revenue. Clients purchase modern versions with new features like smartphones so, new innovations attract buyers’ attention which generates a significant amount of revenue. that’s why innovation is very important in the work employment and development areas.
On the other hand, advocates for social and environmental issues focus on the issues of the community and the living world. There are countless of children, specifically in remote areas, who struggle to access education. In Upper Egypt, most students can’t go to schools easily because some of social and environmental problems like some families don’t let girls enter school, and the roads for going to school can be dangerous in some places. Therefore, innovation should combat these difficulties to help in combating these ravages.
To sum up, although, there are plenty of reasons why individuals support the idea of innovation of the economic growth and profit, in my opinion, social and environmental are more essential to be focused on.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, therefore, while, in addition, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1451.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41417910448 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93252960689 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.600746268657 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.5400223033 49.4020404114 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.916666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281214965582 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865732464506 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688746897476 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.171251320924 0.151304729494 113% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0495430803018 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.39 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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