innovation is often driven by the pursuit of profit and economic growth. however, some argue that it should prioritize addressing social and environmental
discuss both sides and give your opinion
Recently, some people presume that profits and economic growth is often to pursuit into innovation, on the other hand some people argue that addressing social and environment should be the first priority of society. This essay will discuss both sides, and talk about the main themes of the discussion.
Firstly, Profits and economic growth is engine for any country to progression, such as schooling enhancement, also in medical field, following that it will make authorities take an action to addressing social and environmental issues as a consequence of innovation that is driven by economic growth. For example, Saudi Arabia in 1938 when they discovered oil, they have been escalating till they become one of the best economics nowadays, due to that they can now highlight social problems and work on it sensibly. So, there is no point in denying that economic growth is a cheat code to help any authority to Excel in enhancement any field.
In contrast to the first side, there is disparity in viewpoints. Their point of view sees that addressing roots of society and environmental will prepare well-being social. Like if we take attends to adolescence problems, we will formulate good-mannered generation. As a result, it will reflect on the economics of the country. To illustrate, Japan concentrates on addressing social and environmental after Hiroshima accident and exert themselves to compensate for losses, for this reason, they now have one of the most environmental countries in Asia.
Over all, this debate will not be settled by a perfect point of view. Its about how good you will work on it. In my opinion I see that addressing social should be prioritized to reap well-being social to help you in your economic plans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, so, well, for example, in contrast, such as, as a result, in contrast to, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1464.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11888111888 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91059502536 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56993006993 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 76.8380299086 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.615384615 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1538461538 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326289020665 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947688243555 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0952304353965 0.0667982634062 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185737359649 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686486766552 0.056905535591 121% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.42 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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