The chart shows 7 different steps of manufacturing bricks. As we can see a brick making process takes some time and effort to produce the final product.
In the first step, the digger is used to dug fine clay and then it is poured on a metal grid. After that, the grid transfers clay to a roller that takes the raw material to another place. Then it is mixed with water and sand to create a pulp form of clay. In the next step, it is then put in to either the wire cutter or mould to produce brick shaped pieces.
Subsequently, it is then locked in a drying oven for almost 24-48 hours to dry them out. During the next stage, the dried bricks heated in a moderate temperature of 200 - 980 degree Celsius followed by moving them to a high temperature environment of 870 - 1300 degree celsius. This will make bricks more hard and then the bricks are transferred in to a cooling chamber for about 48 - 72 hours. In the final stage the bricks get packed and delivered to the appropriate destinations.
- In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness is decreasing. What are the causes and measure to overcome this trend. 89
- Long distance flight uses more fuel than cars and brings pollution to the environment We should discourage non essential flight rather than limit the use of cars To what extent do you agree or disagree 87
- some people say that too much attention and too many resources are given in the protection of wild animals and birds. do you agree or disagree with this opinion 84
- The chart below shows the number of travellers using three major airports in New York City between 1995 and 2000.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. 73
- few languages are increasingly spoken in different countries, while the usage of others is rapidly declining. is this a positive or negative trend? 27
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 484, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ivered to the appropriate destinations.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 819.0 965.302439024 85% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.42702702703 4.92477711251 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44613196012 2.65546596893 92% => OK
Unique words: 118.0 106.607317073 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637837837838 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 240.3 283.868780488 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 22.4926829268 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.6072908756 43.030603864 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.9 112.824112599 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 22.9334400587 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 5.23603664747 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0223944771452 0.215688989381 10% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.00856719802466 0.103423049105 8% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0172095866476 0.0843802449381 20% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.018413050242 0.15604864568 12% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156107595 0.0819641961636 19% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.2329268293 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 61.2550243902 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 10.3012195122 66% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 11.4140731707 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 40.7170731707 81% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.9970731707 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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