An interesting number of people today change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is this a positive or negative development?
Recently, a multitude of people often change their career and move to other areas to live over their life. Some people assert that this phenomenon is positive, while others argue otherwise. Personally, I believe that both arguments should be given equal weight. In the following essay, both views will be discussed before a conclusion is reached with my opinion.
On the one hand, it seems difficult to refute the idea that there are a number of advantages to change jobs and living areas. An obvious benefit is that this trend makes it possible for people to learn a myriad of useful abilities related to their live and to become more flexible. In addition, people who move to different areas for living can extend the range of their human resources networking since they meet plenty of people, which exerts positive influences on their live. For these reasons, there does seem to be a solid basis for several of the arguments in favour of the moving trend.
On the other hand, it seems short-sighted to contend that changing vocation and residential areas merely brings with it positive. The most oft-cited argument against such a view is that people who work in the field of specific jobs, such as artists, have to devote their whole life to produce masterpieces and obtain fame. In addition, medical professors should invest vast sums of time in their gruelling training courses in order to develop their career. Furthermore, If parents move to another city or country, it might have negative effects on their children who have difficulty in adapting changes resulted from moving. In light of the above, I also find these persuasive.
In conclusion, it is undeniable that there are a variety of opinions about this topic. However, after considering this matter in a careful manner, it can be concluded that each side of the debate has its strengths, as discussed above.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as for, as to, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 316.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.98734177215 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21620550194 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56128809063 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.607594936709 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 498.6 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.3109616876 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.066666667 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0666666667 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 7.06120827912 106% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299218250204 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842467484128 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808515558502 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154101643126 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0644572522361 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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