An interesting number of people today change their career and place of residence several times during their life. Is this a positive or negative development?
people are free to choose their career and place to work. However, some residents just want to stabilize in one placement whilst some others change their career frequently. Although changing career is too risky specially for middle age, switch job is the fastest opportunity to increase their salary and various benefits. also, people can find the best environment they can work in.
The first opponent is about the development of company. some businessmen argue that it slow down the process because of the different need of jobless, the jumper need to relearn from the beginning. On the other hand, they can apply for the similar major of their career. they can not only solve a problem which they acquire in the old companies, but also more passion for their job when they meet some new problem. These people are usually an extrovert type which they find more interesting in a new environment. For the opposite characteristic, there will be a change to improve their skill to be more frequently.
To sum up, there are many positive rather than negative when they take a job in different placement in their career.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, so, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 41.998997996 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 937.0 1615.20841683 58% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93157894737 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55230600203 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 176.041082164 66% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610526315789 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 506.74238477 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.7807710964 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.1818181818 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.2727272727 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256513555337 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10501978044 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071849591528 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183197373565 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451674099532 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.4 13.0946893788 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 78.4519038076 55% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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