International sporting events such as the Olympics Games and the football world cup provide an outlet for patriotic feeling and help reduce International tensions.
Sporting events are part and parcel of the country when it is on an international platform that is a patriotic feeling for all. And also get a chance to prove our ability and do something for the nation, to take part in Olympia games and the football world cup. I believe that it is well-pleasing for me, and it does not depend on the increasing international tensions, it is an opportunity to do for the country and make a proud to be a citizen of that nation.
On the one hand, the global games and composition are good for that person, who take a part in it. He or she has a chance to represent their home town, state and nation. Nowadays, the government also encourage people to take part in sports activities because it helps to person as fit as fiddle. So that is the best reason to do some sport after that your keen to go ahead and play in Olympic games or other sport games. But first-person needs to burn the midnight oil for doing the beat from others.
On other hand, when you play at a global level after that feeling is succour the person in future. And I talk about India when someone plays in Olympic or other sports game on an international platform. After they have completed that game and come back to India. Our people have to do great welcome that person as well as greeting their family members. So that feeling is top of the world.
However, sports person never hesitated to make a decision based on the platform, it does not matter to paty in the international level or the national level. They always focus on the games so it does not depend to reduce International tensions.
In recapitulation, international sporting games are very important for the country and it is economy. Because at present people are well aware of these competitions. I deem that, it gives a patriotic feeling as well as help to self-motivation somehow, it succour to rage to riches.
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Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...fter that feeling is succour the person in future. And I talk about India when someone pl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... well as greeting their family members. So that feeling is top of the world. Howeve...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tant for the country and it is economy. Because at present people are well aware of the...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 256, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'succours'?
Suggestion: succours
... as help to self-motivation somehow, it succour to rage to riches.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53801169591 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69149465858 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476608187135 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1950149321 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61111111111 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341843599462 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105862190599 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875287786032 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189683843325 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677544615898 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 89, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...fter that feeling is succour the person in future. And I talk about India when someone pl...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 353, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... well as greeting their family members. So that feeling is top of the world. Howeve...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 103, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...tant for the country and it is economy. Because at present people are well aware of the...
^^^^^^^
Line 8, column 256, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'succours'?
Suggestion: succours
... as help to self-motivation somehow, it succour to rage to riches.
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1552.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 342.0 315.596192385 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.53801169591 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30037696126 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69149465858 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.476608187135 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 495.0 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.1950149321 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.2222222222 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.61111111111 7.06120827912 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.341843599462 0.244688304435 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105862190599 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0875287786032 0.0667982634062 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.189683843325 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0677544615898 0.056905535591 119% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.05 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.