International sports events are costly and also bring problem for the hosting nation .to what extent do you agree with the statement
It is undeniable that organising sports events brings name and frame for a country; however, holding such events is very expensive as it puts extra burden on the economy of a nation. I do believe that although organising multinational sports activities is costly task yet the infrastructure that is maintained during this task benefits the locals afterwards.This essay will explain my view point before reaching the conclusion in the upcoming paragraphs.
To begin with the major advantage of holding such events is that it helps to improve the condition of infrastructure as well as raise the standard of living of people.To be precise, special attention is paid on the maintenance of roads, proper lighting system and keeping the surrounding spic and span which proves beneficial for the local residents too. For example,the roads of Europe are well maintained due to the fact that mostly FIFA cup is held there. Moreover, these international matches also assist to boost the economy of the hosting nation because the players and the foreign spectators pay money to buy local crafts, for hiring taxes and for staying in hotels which helps to improve the standard of living of residents and proves beneficial to ameliorate the economy of hosting nation.
On the other hand holding these events has few disadvantages also. The major drawback is connected with environment as trees are cut down and farmland is cleared as well for making stadiums which gives birth to deforestation. Further more,the pollution that is increased due to increasing number of a vehicles also puts detrimental impact on the health of local people. For example, people start suffering from health issues like asthma ,heart diseases during these sports programs.
To conclude,international sports events has both pros and cons. If these programs are organised in a systematic way then they would not only enhance the popularity of the hosting nation but also upgrade the living standard of its residents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, as well as, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1669.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.23197492163 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95268852283 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573667711599 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 96.7771573349 49.4020404114 196% => OK
Chars per sentence: 151.727272727 106.682146367 142% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.0 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8181818182 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.265650914505 0.244688304435 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0941260069822 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530047296339 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153494731012 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0217421388521 0.056905535591 38% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.04 50.2224549098 84% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.65 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.38 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 9.78957915832 204% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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