Advanced mode of transportation has revolutionized the way of rambling- it has turned the international circuit into a piece of cake. The whole world has turned into a global village. Ultra-speedy means of traveling has, indeed, promoted the international tours unexpectedly. Correspondingly, it emanates copiously favorable as well as unfavorable effects. However, as per my experiences, the merits of this phenomenon overweigh its demerits.
One of the cardinal factors is that traveling across the borders magnetizes foreign currency which, indeed, gives leverage to the economy. Tourists spend a bundle of money to enjoy a lavish vacation: staying in luxurious hotels, using the exclusive transportation mode, and purchasing all the unique goods. All these things boost the growth in foreign currency fund and balance the trade deficit. Moreover, it catalysts small indigenous business: handicrafts, tourist guides, and other small units. For example, Indian small unit brand 'KHADI' has become popular among foreigners because of its natural and Indian herbs; now it is on its surge.
Another bright side of this notion is that it helps people to bridge the cultural gap worldwide. They get the opportunity to swap their cultural values, believes, and traditions. This compassion strengthens the relationship between/ among countries. One of the episodes of my life is the paragon of the aforesaid notion when I visited Dubai with my friends; my friends and I taught Punjabi dance to our taxi driver and gave him some homemade snakes. He was very impressed by our dance form and snakes and was excited to visit India to savor Punjabi cuisines.
Despite copious Brightside, it has a few downsides: Many students go abroad for pursuing their higher studies and to learn some specific skills, skilled people get settled there for earning a handsome salary and many business tycoons establish the business units due to free trade policies. Because of these, our own country suffers from a lack of extraordinary students, skilled and experienced workers, and huge business projects.
To recapitulate, I would like to assert that the popularity of international circuit has significantly benefited the humanity to grow and to broaden their mental horizons. Here, in my own experience, the pros prevail over the cons.
- Some people say that all young people should have full time education until they are 18 years old To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion 90
- International travel is extremely popular these days. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend? Include your opinion and examples from your own experience. 96
- Countries are becoming more and more similar because people are able to buy the same products anywhere in the world.Do you think this is a positive or negative development? 89
- Some people are convinced that mature age employees are beneficial to a company Others think that younger employees contribute more and hence more beneficial to a company Discuss both the views and give your opinion 98
- Because of the busy pace of modern life many children spend most of their time indoors and have little exposure to the natural world Discuss the effects lack of experience with and understanding of nature can have on children as they grow up 88
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Correction: Snacks
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1975.0 1615.20841683 122% => OK
No of words: 363.0 315.596192385 115% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44077134986 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.3649236973 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98203990306 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633608815427 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 614.7 506.74238477 121% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.1476585156 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.947368421 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1052631579 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.26315789474 7.06120827912 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.100732569697 0.244688304435 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0288182102514 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0300749718331 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0540468153963 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0273533155784 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.02 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 125.0 78.4519038076 159% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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