International travel has many advantages to both travellers and the country that they visited. Do Advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
It is true that the growth of global tourism has brought a number of benefits to to tourists and the host country. While there are strong arguments that international travel also results in several consequences, I believe that the drawbacks are outweighed by the merits of this trend.
On the one hand, there are certain damages which global travel can inflict on tourists and the nation. In terms of travellers, there are chances that they are rip off by local seller when shopping at a market. These sellers often mark up the price to double or triple the original one to take advantage of the wealthy customers. Therefore, foreigners often spend abundant but unnecessary expenditure when travelling an unfamiliar country. When it comes to the host nation, global tourisms cause some concerns in certain aspects such as environment and tradition. It is undeniable that there are some tourists who are not aware of their responsibility of keeping the environment hygienic. Therefore, the authorities have to spend a large amount of money on cleaning some tourist attractions after holidays. Moreover, some travellers are not familiar to the traditional customs and practices in the host country and unintentionally make mistakes in following the culture of that country. For example, in Vietnam, it is inapproriate to wear informal clothes at some spiritual sites such as temples or pagodas; however, sometimes, we can catch sight of foreigners wearing inapproriate clothes to these places due to their unawareness, which raise the waves of indignation in the local.
On the other hand, despite some consequences, we should not forget the indispensable role the international travel industry plays in the process of obtaining new knowledge of the travellers and nation’s economy. For a start, global tourism gives tourists a chance to broaden their horizons by travelling to another country and acquire their culture. Moreover, international travel provides travellers with a subjective view about the host nation. For example, in the past, some foreigners see Vietnam as a backward and impoverished country. However, some people who have travelled to Vietnam have a different view, they consider Vietnam as a developing countries with 3 metropolises, several industrial regions and technology applications have appeared in this country. Another point to consider is that tourism, especially global tourism, accounts for a large amount of nation’s profits, hence the development in other industries. Additionally, thanks to international travel, the Vietnam has been recognized in some aspects. Without global travel, no one would know Ha Long Bay or Trang An Complex Landscape to make it the World Heritage.
In conclusion, despite the obvious disadvantages of international travel, the benefits it brings to the travellers themselves and the host country is undeniable and much greater than the drawbacks.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 64.0 41.998997996 152% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2470.0 1615.20841683 153% => OK
No of words: 454.0 315.596192385 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44052863436 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.61598047577 4.20363070211 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.07462162596 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 230.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.506607929515 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 768.6 506.74238477 152% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.7385058567 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.5 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243788396617 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755319677911 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0717325078854 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164499300775 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606129494157 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 127.0 78.4519038076 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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