International travel has many advantages to both travelers and the country visited.
Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?
Unarguably, traveling to a foreign country has certainly exerted several positive effects on travelers and the country visited. It is my view that international travel does more harm than good to society.
It is important to recognize that one of the enormous advantages of international tourism is to boost nations’ economies. Taking Thailand as an example, there are millions of tourists visiting there every year; hence, it contributes to the cuisine and hotel sectors whose income generated comprises a large proportion of national income. Besides, being able to travel out of the country can help people be exposed to a variety of local cultures. This exposure to foreign customs and people would provide visitors with more different aspects of life, and thus they can gain a better sense of self and a broader perspective.
However, these benefits might be eclipsed by the downsides to some extent. With regard to the tourists, travel expenses are highly expensive due to including countless costs such as transportation and service and many complicated procedures. For the host country, a massive influx of visitors can eventually lead to immense environmental threats. These factors entail the increased presence of excessive constructions which have tendencies to alter or even completely destroy natural habitats; therefore, the indigenous species would be on the verge of extinction. Furthermore, the frequent use of vehicles may raise carbon emissions and cause extensive damage such as water and air pollution.
In conclusion, while international tourism can bring economic benefits and rewarding experiences to tourists as well as the host country, there is a widespread worry that it may lead to the environmental issues and considerable costs and risks. The responsibility of mitigating the disadvantages of international tourism falls on not only governments but also citizens to foster better development.
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| 2022-12-03 | anndePhuong | 84 | view |
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| 2020-12-29 | my linh | 84 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, while, in conclusion, such as, as well as, with regard to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1638.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.53378378378 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.12682196704 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.638513513514 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 524.7 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.1292204172 49.4020404114 106% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.0 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7692307692 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.9230769231 7.06120827912 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.214515991976 0.244688304435 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0651528118239 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0719158346073 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124757618486 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0851686824183 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 32.22 50.2224549098 64% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.09 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.06 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 100.0 78.4519038076 127% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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