People becoming prejudiced against the countries they have traveled to seems to be an increasing problem in many countries. I believe that lack of understanding regarding the local culture responsible for this and that measures should be taken to combat this situation.
People generally know little about the culture of their destination. Although it is significantly convenient to search the relevant information just via travel journal or websites, they are more inclined to view the culture of the place according to their already possessing knowledge, which may lead to two types of unpleasant experience after beginning their journey. Firstly, some of them might miss the chances of visiting the place of historical interest and learning through local traditional culture. As a Chinese saying goes, no visit to Beijing is complete if you miss seeing the Great Wall or dining on Roast Duck. At the end of the trip, they may argue that it is such a tiresome journey, obviously deepening the prejudice against the country.
At the same time, people from foreign countries ordinarily lack awareness of and respect for the local culture. There might be a conflict for sightseers with the locals who provide tour guide service and others, brought by misunderstanding and leading to people being more inclined against tourist destination.
I think, therefore, the travelers need to alter the preparation for their traveling, getting to know the tradition carefully through travel agencies rather than relying on their general knowledge. Meanwhile, the local authority should take the initiative to conduct their traditional culture to visitors, such as setting up reception at airports to introduce the information for those just arriving and having doubts.
With the efforts of the government and tourists, such measures could reduce the sense of prejudice during the traveling. Indeed, nobody wants to spend a terrible holiday and suffer discrimination.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 72, Rule ID: TO_NON_BASE[1]
Message: The verb after "to" should be in the base form: 'seem'.
Suggestion: seem
...nst the countries they have traveled to seems to be an increasing problem in many cou...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, regarding, so, therefore, while, i think, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1660.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.44262295082 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88637086861 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616393442623 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 61.4560024464 49.4020404114 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.692307692 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.130344473823 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0456437768586 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544139630793 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0799753558625 0.151304729494 53% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0747944679101 0.056905535591 131% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.28 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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