The internet allows us to stay connected with each other no matter where we are. On the other hand, it also isolates us and encourages people not to socialise.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with these statements?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The internet is a wonderful tool that helps us to keep in touch with each other anywhere in the world. However, some website became an obsession to stay at home without going outside to see their friends. I largely agree with the said notion dur to it we can meet our close ones with various applications and there are many who is concerned about the impact the internet has in our daily life.
First, let us consider some of the benefits of internet. Undoubtedly, it is true that it helps us to stay connected anywhere in the world. To elaborate it, let's say in the business world, many of the Indian organization is a part of some abroad companies. They are connected together because of the internet. Also, they can do theor work through it. For instance, my cousin were backpacking around the world, he were able to reassure that their friends and family is doing well and also share some memories immediately, using social networking sites.
Secondly, their is an another side to the coin. In this 21st century , as technology are developing quickly our work is also only a mouse click away. Consequently, many people find it difficult to escape from their work. Furthermore , these website may encourage us to live in anti- social behaviour. This people may end up to make more virtual friends than real friends. For example, a persona who is addicted to his mobile all the day without any connection in the real world, he may isolate himself more and more.
In conclusion, I completely agree that, although there are clear benefits to the internet and there are certain risks. It keeps us connected with each other and on the other hand these risks can be minimised through education.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: some
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Suggestion: a side; another side
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Suggestion: ,
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Suggestion: ,
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Message: Did you mean 'this website' or 'these websites'?
Suggestion: this website; these websites
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, first, furthermore, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1404.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.7593220339 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54777832041 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586440677966 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 44.4044793401 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.5882352941 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3529411765 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23529411765 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273087289136 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.08084356439 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.078496339223 0.0667982634062 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172067630236 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694058069411 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 13.0946893788 74% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.03 12.4159519038 81% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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