In many countries, the quality of life in the large cities is becoming worse. What causes this problem? What measure can be taken to solve it?
Nowadays , life become so difficult in big cities specially the quality of the life .This essay will discuss the main causes of bad quality such as overpopulated and pollution.Beside this essay will suggest solutions to the problems include developed other cities and enforce law to use less car .
Firstly, increase in the number of population and uses of more transportation have great impact on people life's .The reason is that if there is enhance in the growth of citizens then it occupy more space for buildings because they have to stay somewhere. Moreover, uses of trucks,bikes, cars have tremendous effect due to pollution they release . For instance, Delhi is the capital of India ,as we know the city is crowded as well as polluted because young generation have many job opportunities rather than other cities .Hence they prefer to go their which become the city in that situation.
Increasing the job opportunities and implement the laws are both critical to mitigating the bad state. government need to realise if they develop other cities , few civilians migrate to other cities. The reason is now they have same opportunities in different cities.Furthermore,if the authority impose stringent laws then people would use less motor vehicles. For example-In Delhi ,"Aam Aadmi Party" has taken meagre steps against this by using the term odd or even system.
In conclusion, this situations have detrimental result on people who live in large cities.This essay discussed how pollution and population become the city's life worst. This essay also recommend that the solutions to this problems that government should take steps to improve the circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1419.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33458646617 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01438935937 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.612781954887 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.1269287963 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.9 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.6 20.7667163134 128% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.3 7.06120827912 188% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 38.0 5.01903807615 757% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181763902815 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0664272704075 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0688752487865 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123958362491 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0708797541585 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 9.78957915832 189% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.