The internet has dramatically altered our lives over the past few decades. Although some of these changed have been negative, the overall effect of this technology has been positive.
What are you opinions on this?
It is true that the internet has been playing a pivotal role these days due to advancements of the latest technology. However, it usually creates numerous issues in society but the benefits of the internet are plenty. This essay will discuss both negative as well as positive effects.
The first advantage of the web is that communication made easy, people can contact one another within a short period of time instantly. This means that nowadays, number of web sites are available to connect people each other, take Facebook as an example. Also, the internet can save more period of time especially in both medical and other work field. Therefore, the internet has become indispensable part of daily life and many people rely on it.
None the less, the internet are producing number of problems in society. To begin with, excessive use of computer may develop many health ailments especially among youngsters. This is because, some times they will sit and surf for a long hours without any break or rest and consequently, this will adversely affect the health of them. Besides this, electronic waste has become a common issue in the community due to lack of waste management and availability of cheap gadgets in markets. Thus, it is clear that it also has many troubles both medically and technically.
To sum up, despite the internet usually generate plenty of issues, I believe that it has not only changed the life of people but also can maintain good companionship between people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...omputer may develop many health ailments especially among youngsters. This is bec...
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'hour'?
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...times they will sit and surf for a long hours without any break or rest and consequen...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, consequently, first, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, well, as well as, it is true, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1241.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 250.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.964 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97635364384 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63199088144 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.628 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4039291882 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.4615384615 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2307692308 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.3076923077 7.06120827912 146% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133122321214 0.244688304435 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0421334647024 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0349474687206 0.0667982634062 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0779379904997 0.151304729494 52% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0366144224659 0.056905535591 64% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 13.0946893788 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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