The internet has greater influence on people than TV does because it is more popular. To what extent do you agree of disagree?
it is suggested that the internet is well-known, so it has greater impact on individuals than television these days. In my opinion, I partically disagree with this view because I believe internet has a good effect on users but I am firmly convinced that tv is also vital for them.
On the one hand, the internet has many benefits for users today. The first of benefits that is communication. there fore, the users can connect with their family members who has long distance from them and do not have pay fee for this activity because of media networking. For example, the people live in rural areas, so they move their hometown to live in biggest city for making a living and the internet help them call video for their parents everyday. Another benefit is education which is crucial for student and country development. Infact, the were several pupils who study online when covid 19 came because they could not go to school at that time. As a result the internet has a positive effect on individuals.
On the other hand, there are more compeling reason why I firm ly tv important for people life. Firstly, there are more and more elder person who can not use the internet, so they watch tv to know what the world is happening and gain their more knowledge. For instance, old person in many countries do not use mobile phone and they often access news on tv and this problems help they know other places how. Secondly, television shows the real infomation for individuals. Not similar the internet, people can contact with the new on tv without worried about that. this can be seen in news programmes which are many news daily basic and it belong to government, so it is difficult to fake newa.
To sum up, although I believe the internet has many benefits for users, I am firmly convinced the tv really necessary for people.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: therefore
...irst of benefits that is communication. there fore, the users can connect with their famil...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'distanced'.
Suggestion: distanced
... with their family members who has long distance from them and do not have pay fee for t...
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Line 2, column 355, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'in the biggest'.
Suggestion: in the biggest
...as, so they move their hometown to live in biggest city for making a living and the intern...
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Line 2, column 447, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
... help them call video for their parents everyday. Another benefit is education which is ...
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Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ey could not go to school at that time. As a result the internet has a positive ef...
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Message: Use only 'elder' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
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...eople life. Firstly, there are more and more elder person who can not use the internet, so...
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...e new on tv without worried about that. this can be seen in news programmes which ar...
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Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...an be seen in news programmes which are many news daily basic and it belong to gover...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun news seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much news', 'a good deal of news'.
Suggestion: much news; a good deal of news
...an be seen in news programmes which are many news daily basic and it belong to government...
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Message: Did you mean 'belongs'?
Suggestion: belongs
... which are many news daily basic and it belong to government, so it is difficult to fa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, as a result, in my opinion, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1505.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6450617284 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46569783801 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543209876543 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6480322915 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.0625 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191108814541 0.244688304435 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0634072953735 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0527694678147 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120918820954 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0517694834534 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.69 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.