The bar chart illustrates the percentage of magazine genres sold by the company in 1975, 1995 and 2015.
In general, there was a downward trend in the proportion of fashion and health, while the opposite was true for other types of magazines. In addition, during the period, the sales figure of sports magazine was the best-selling publication and the sales number of food and others remained unchanged, although they reached a peak in 1995.
In 2015, with nearly 32% of the total sports was bought, making it the highest compared to other figures. Besides, the percentage of fashion magazine was around 21% which was approximately double that of food magazine. Especially, the sales of health and others kind of magazine was over 25%, being equal.
Turning to magazines genres with their trend, A significant increase of approximately 10% was seen in the percentage of sports. By contrast, the sales figure of fashion witnessed a remarkable decrease of over 15%, which was a quarter that of figures in 1975. Similarly, the period from 1975 to 1995 experienced a slight drop of over 5% in the proportion of health magazine, but later remain unchanged from 1995 to 2015. However, the food magazine and others type of magazine was sold by the company, hitting the highest point in 1995, with the former rising to 22% and the latter to 32%, but after 20 years of rapid growth, the sales number of these magazine genres had started to experienced a leveling off.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...although they reached a peak in 1995. In 2015, with nearly 32% of the total spor...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, however, if, similarly, so, while, in addition, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 6.8 132% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1220.0 965.302439024 126% => OK
No of words: 248.0 196.424390244 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91935483871 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.96837696647 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63802144191 2.65546596893 99% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516129032258 0.547539520022 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 360.9 283.868780488 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 9.0 4.33902439024 207% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 3.36585365854 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5936392186 43.030603864 132% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.0 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8 22.9334400587 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1 5.23603664747 155% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 3.70975609756 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247321907286 0.215688989381 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110896734241 0.103423049105 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10406690722 0.0843802449381 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195295097156 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.122750224741 0.0819641961636 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 61.2550243902 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.