We are now living in a 4.0 era, which alters the way spreading and consuming information. This phenomenon also created unexpected matters. This essay will elaborate on several effects and suggest several solutions.
One of the major impacts is that so many nations and governments have to deal with informatic war. That is to say, those Internet crimes would take advantage of the Internet nowadays to break into the firewall of the countries’s Internet-bearing security, which causes bad impacts on the people of that nations. This phenomenon is absolutely an enormous threat to the security of that countries. The solution is for the government to raise awareness of the important role of Internet-bearing security and educate brilliant labor in the technological field to face informatic issues.
Another problem is that Internet users could be spoiled because of negative information. With the various approach to share information, some people seem not to know the correct way to consume information. This is because the large amount of news on the internet might make cyber users confused about whether they are fake or reliable, which could pose misunderstanding and trust issues. Even worse, cybercrimes could take advantage of internet users to make them take part in social misconduct. To tackle this matter, Internet users should be guided to use the internet and classify information correctly. It is mean that the authorities could warn their citizens about the danger of unreliable news and teach them the way to consume information correctly. In terms of individuals, they should use the internet carefully and try not to involve in scams.
In conclusion, from what has been mentioned above, it can be affirmed that the way information is shared and consumed has changed on the internet, which also created matters that exist for the first time. Thus, it is highly recommended that both authorities and individuals should together take action to solve this issue.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, so, thus, in conclusion, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.29652996845 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94523042744 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548895899054 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 523.8 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.8772845408 49.4020404114 97% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 7.06120827912 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280278195556 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0810098071619 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0705562680168 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154780478589 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0547148974206 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.46 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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