Internet social media have become very popular. To what extent do you think this is a good or bad thing? Why do you think this is the case?
Due to the constant advancement of technology, social medias have become increasingly common. There are numerous reasons to this phenomenon. While certain advantages come along with the phenomenon, it still has detrimental effects on our life.
The top reason for this situation is the rapid development of technology. The continual introduction of new generations of smart devices enable social platforms to be more accessible, since they can connect to the Internet at a staggering speed and precision; additionally, devices are becoming more mobile and convenient. Next to it, the popularity of social medias relies solely on their mechanisms. The platforms use algorithms in a way that cause be people to be addicted to them. These algorithms show users what they need base on their information, favouritism or bias. For example, Facebook's news feed show users posts relevant to what they have interacted with in the past.
While many people claim that the popularity of these platform makes communication more simple and less expensive, it comes with tremendous drawbacks. Firstly, making these platform more common means that people will expose to more unfiltered information. Social medias are constructed not only by developers, users also take part in creating a virtual society, meaning the information on such platforms is merely unverified ideas. Hence, social medias aggravate the false information problem. Secondly, social medias are highly addictive. As I mentioned above, social medias work in a way that make users to be engrossed in them, and being addicted to surfing the net is extremely harmful to one's health. Moreover, being addicted prevent users from working productively. Last but not least, although social medias help connect people from all over the world, they can give users a false sense of relationship. This means that the platforms can make a person disoriented and neglect their trustworthy friends to pursuit something as mediocre as followers.
In conclusion, the popularity of social medias leads to various adverse impacts on our life. Nevertheless, it is not a bad idea to use social media wisely.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, still, while, for example, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1810.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 336.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.3869047619 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93350188668 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.580357142857 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 568.8 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.3689173468 49.4020404114 100% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.5 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 7.06120827912 88% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15912901553 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566739756934 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410133728228 0.0667982634062 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114524960678 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0197471250604 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.69 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.