The internet is viewed as a excellent means of communication by many. However, there are some who would argue that it is actually destroying our communication skills.
Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
Many people consider that, the internet is the best way to get in touch with others, whereas, it is argued by some that, internet damages our communication skills. In my opinion, since we are enjoying the internet, which is wonderful gift of science, we would not forget to maintain our traditional modes of communication.
On the one hand, with the advancement of science and technology, our life is very easy , fast and comfortable. In other words, people are able to connect with their loved ones regardless of distance. To illustrate, even in remote villages people make use of internet to do video chat, to pay phone and electricity bill , to make an appointment with doctor and so on. In addition to that, despite attending regular classes, many colleges offer online courses and online examinations. That is why, people believe internet makes everything is at our fingertips and they consider internet as an ideal mode of communication.
Even though internet has many advantages in the communication field, many argue that face to face communication has taken a back seat. For instance, some recent studies in the media highlighted that the percentage of people who spend a long time on internet increasing day by day, and the time spend with their dear and near ones dramatically decreasing. Moreover, the declining trend can observed in the case of writing skills. In spite of handwritten documents, now people manly depend on computer . Because it has many facilities like spell check, auto correction and even grammar check. If internet replace the traditional communication skills we may lose our culture, become very lazy, family and social interaction will be less and follow a sedentary life style which often leads to many health issues.
To summarize this topic, I would like to emphasize that, although internet helps us to interact with people all across the world for various purposes, it is our responsibility to support the communication skills that we are following for the ages. Even if, we enjoy the blessing of internet, it is always better to organize some kind of get together or handwriting competitions in order to keep our communication skills.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, may, moreover, so, whereas, for instance, in addition, kind of, in my opinion, in other words, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 17.0 8.3376753507 204% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 357.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11204481793 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34677393335 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93187963769 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.582633053221 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 584.1 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 12.0 4.76152304609 252% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.8551059239 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.666666667 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213939633958 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0695454023347 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0641515777354 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148844068948 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0615511228937 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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