Most developed countries spend a large proportion of their health budgeys on expensive medical technology and procedures. This money should be spent instead on health education to keep people well. To what extent do you agree with this
Health education has been taken by many countries as a great mission. Spending a huge sum of money, is thought by many that, required for the expensive advanced medical treatments and procedures. Whereas, it is considered by some that, money should be used to give health education. In my opinion, although health education can tackle certain diseases, it is not always possible in case of emergencies.
To begin with, since health education has limited role to meet a large number of diseases, the focus should be on the treatment. For example, serious accident cases require many diagnostic evaluations and surgeries, it is certainly expensive, but health education will not save the life here. In addition, certain illnesses are hereditary such as cardiac problems since it does not cure with health education.
Furthermore, in spite of continuous awareness programs through television, people may not have the discipline to keep away from unhealthy practices. To illustrate, despite having the knowledge about fast food related health issues, many people consume it, because of its taste.
However, providing health education would prevent many epidemic diseases like small pox, bird flu and so on. Secondly, it would help people to follow hygienic practices to avoid spreading of many diseases. Moreover, AIDS and other sexually transmitted diseases would be eradicated with effective health education.
In conclusion, even though health education can prevent many diseases, it can not reduce the cost of treatment in necessary situations. Hence, treating patient with illness should be focused along while providing health education.
- The pie charts below show the popularity of different political parties in a countrt before and after the election The election was won by the Conservative party and they formed government with the Liberal Democrats party 77
- The line graph gives information about how people in the united kingdom spend their income 83
- Below is a line char showing incidence of serious crime in a large UK city from December to November Total incidence of violent crime are shown in addition to incidence of 4 serious crime types 74
- Governments make many rules to protect people from danger for example by making people wear seat belts in cars or not allowing smoking in public places However many people believe that there are too many rules nowadays To what extent do you agree with thi 88
- Despite the best efforts of crime fighting organizations crime will never be eradicated from civilized society To what extent do you agree 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 64, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, in spite of, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.55555555556 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78672029951 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642857142857 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.0679310727 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 100.0 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.257667965582 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0953117522262 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.044312553971 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14334590834 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0542836142333 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.8 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.23 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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