The advancement in technology has made easier for people to be connected with each other via internet. Although, many individuals find it great way to communicate, some argue that it is adversely affecting our communication skills. I would give my opinion after discussing both views in further paragraphs.
On one hand, the internet has made possible for us to connect with friends 24 by 7, even if they are staying in different countries. It is become easier to communicate to people staying far away by means of many social message sites and apps.For example, students going abroad for their higher studies can stay in contact with their parents by video call. Moreover, the internet has made it more convenient and easy that people of any age can operate it as opposed to old times were people have to make special calls which charge them heavy money.
On other hand, internet has many flaws which may impact our social and communication skill adversely. The people, especially younger generation are so intensely engaged in social media sites that they find it hard to interact with people in person. Moreover, the younger generation are playing online games more than playing actual outdoor sports which is necessary to improve their social as well as communication skills. Additionally, people also don't gather on festivals as they used to before which has also affected communication between youth and older generations.
To conclude and give my opinion, although the internet has affected our communication skills, I believe it has contributed more in communication by making it easier and flexible for everyone.
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- The internet is viewed as an excellent means of communication by many However there are some who would argue that it is actually destroying our communication skills Discuss both views and give your opinion 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1367.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.17803030303 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79363443662 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587121212121 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8778777074 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.272727273 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237637526439 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0988151811257 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0913459949752 0.0667982634062 137% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174361247812 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0977497308825 0.056905535591 172% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.06 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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