Inventors are not as important to society as doctors.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Some people think that inventors don't have essential roles like doctors. I strongly disagree with that , both should be treated equally.
Firstly, the revolution of social networking is rapidly growing, which is the result of inventors. This invention allows us to connect with each other easily, expand the diversity of information about the world,… just by an electrical device like phone, laptop, smart TV,… Moreover, inventors also can bring a better community for us, they create a charity. As there’re so many poor people who are disabled, handicapped, blind,…; inventors such as the representative that they introduce and encourage more conditional people to support them, find out the solution that pay money sufficiently to make people with disabilities be better.
On the other hand, doctors have a main duty to devote to our society. they cure people either physical health or mental health. For example, nowadays, students have to face peer pressure, doctors give them opportunities to talk, to be listened and recharge their batteries after that. In addition, in spite of Covid 19 infection, health workers still got over it. However, the fact that our world escapes from it with strong protection from vaccines of Sars-cov-2 -one of the most inventions from 2020 to 2022.
it’s clear that we can’t exist without preventing and curing diseases doctors or inventions about technology, fashion, medicines,… to contribute to society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, moreover, so, still, for example, in addition, such as, in spite of, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1232.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 228.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.40350877193 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81631967793 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.728070175439 0.561755894193 130% => OK
syllable_count: 368.1 506.74238477 73% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 75.555026196 49.4020404114 153% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7272727273 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.10789466039 0.244688304435 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0349646230689 0.084324248473 41% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0246002354129 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0614138549392 0.151304729494 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181392227862 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.04 12.4159519038 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.