Improving public mental health has been a popular topic in many countries’ authorities recently. It is debated that the best approach to this would be investing in local amenities including amusement centres. I tend to disagree with this statement for several reasons presented accordingly.
On the one hand, some people argue that to foster a good community spirit, it is best for the government to spend more on leisure complexes. This could be done by constructing theme parks, libraries, cinemas, theatres, museums, galleries, swimming pools, fitness rooms... and allowing affordable to free access for the residents. This approach seems to be effective since it could enable poor people to have places to enjoy and relax, thus improving their mental well-being. In addition, these leisure centres could bring people together. By going to a gym or a swimming pool, people can meet and make new friends, giving them the opportunities to improve their social circle.
Meanwhile, I believe that to maintain a great social spirit, it is more efficient to invest in other fields such as education and healthcare. Turning to the root of the problem, citizens could not be happy if they still have to cope with living expenses and sickness. Hence, the government should improve the education system to ensure that the vast majority of their residents have a degree, which could offer them a well-paid job, as well as provide free healthcare services so that people can have fewer worries about their health problems.
To conclude, although spending money on developing amenities might be worthwhile regarding its wide range of advantages, from my perspective, concentrating on education and healthcare would be a more feasible approach to foster a good community spirit. This is because entertainment is essential, but not as vital as literacy and medical care to be the top priority of the authorities.
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food 78
- Nowadays celebrities increasingly have the status of role models in particular for younger people Do you see this as a positive or negative development 84
- Investment in local amenities such as leisure centres is the best way for the government to foster a good community spirit 84
- In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating too much fast food It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher tax on this kind of food 87
- Some people think that dangerous sports should be banned while others think people should be free to choose Discuss both views and give your opinion 89
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, but, hence, if, regarding, so, still, thus, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1600.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 306.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.22875816993 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18244613648 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85522933793 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604575163399 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.5799925328 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.285714286 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227889715497 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0745956761074 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.101026916774 0.0667982634062 151% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120757846627 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0383171757575 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.05 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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