The issue of environment problems is a subject of much controversy. Some people argue that those problems are very large to solve individually. Others claim that environment problems can not be solved without personal action.
The environment problems are thought to be not easy for individuals to solve, but in fact, we can actually take up some good habits which could prove useful in dealing with environmental problems. In other words, each person can do some good small things to contribute to protect the environment. For instance, people should use recycle bags instead of plastic ones, which is non-biodegradable. Reportedly, a research suggests that plastic does not decompose over time. Moreover, the combustion of plastic provoke air pollution. Therefore, the more plastic we use, the more menace to the envionment. This directly infers that humans should reduce environment by small action such as using less plastic.
On the other hands, it is certainly true that environments can be solved easier with the help of governments. To be specific, governments have power to publish the mandatory implementation of diminishing environment problems. Take the law that ban the emission of wastes from factory directly into the air and water sources as an illustration for the impact of authorities on improving environments. As a result, less sewage is emited to the environments so humans can live in clean environment. What can be inferred from this is that governments should implement law to address the environment problems.
In conclusion, each citizen should collaborate with the authorities to tackle the environment problems. I believe that those problems will be solved as soon as possible.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 408, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: research
...which is non-biodegradable. Reportedly, a research suggests that plastic does not decompos...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1254.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 234.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.35897435897 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91114542567 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.14642538365 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589743589744 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.0669554141 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.5714285714 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7142857143 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.78571428571 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.262310344423 0.244688304435 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0865903856329 0.084324248473 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831637146329 0.0667982634062 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184893137064 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321516976921 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.51 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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