It is better for college students to live in schools than live at home with their parents .
Do you agree or disagree ?
It is said to be more beneficial for university learners to reside in schools instead of living with parents . Although staying at schools could perhaps provoke some advantages but personally I completely disagree this idea for a number of reasons which will be outlined in this essay.
On the one hand , staying in campus daily actually has some advantages for themselves . Firstly , it will gradually make a formatation of their new independent life . Students must be aware of what they have to take actions like self-study , doing personal hygiene properly , preparing schedule steamlinely and so on . Secondly , people will have trouble in dealing with a variety of difficulty and how to solve those issues is firmly challenging without parents and it leads to that learners will realize and receive more experiences in life and afterall matureness and resourcefulness are two thoughts that they should be in compliance with if they want to success in upcoming life.
On the other hand , it simultaneously has few drawbacks as soon as people never desire to cope with . To begin with , living far from home can tackle a lack of parental sentiment , homesickness . Its problems could partly influence on their study and easily distract on these consequences . Therefore , study results maybe increasingly bad and Neglecting from study can become unavoidable consequence for them .
In conclusion , it is inargueable that staying in school are both beneficial and disadvantageous in many aspects and in my viewpoint , this issue is extremely important to play a vital role of development of students mentally and intellectually .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my view, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1365.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31128404669 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10019403672 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642023346304 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 83.4444438331 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.090909091 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.3636363636 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232081188426 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0805637974566 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697186548989 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125028010642 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0629739657973 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.39 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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