It is better to save money than to spend it.
How far do you agree with this statement? Is saving more important than spending in
Give reasons for your answer, and provide ideas and examples from your own
experience. You should write at least 250 words.
Nowadays, many people have been struggling with the question whether to save or to spend money. While I agree that saving is a wise choice in the modern world, I believe that spending money is also very crucial to an individual.
On the one hand, saving money is a good preparation for uncertain future. It is possible for a person to meets difficulties such as unemployment, health problems, or other crisis. To overcome these, it is essential to have some funds in reserve and the only possible way is to save money. Moreover not spending too much money is also an effective way for people to become more discipline. As a result, they can learn to how to build and achieve a goal. It can be seen that successful people always start their dream by saving every penny they have.
On the other hand, the Earth is a very beautiful place so people should live for the moment and spend their money accordingly. For some people using money to shopping or to travelling is a way to help feel comfortable and relax. The feeling of having some new items on their hand or set their foot on places that they have never been their is a huge boost mentally. Consequently, this motivate people to work harder and contribute better. Furthermore, spending money on products or services is also a good way to improve the economy as well as the employment of the world
In a nutshell, I believe that saving is very important in the society nowadays. However I do not think that it can outweigh the benefits of spending money. It is best to balance both in a sensible way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nding money. It is best to balance both in a sensible way.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, consequently, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, while, such as, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1283.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.56583629893 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57837961483 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.526690391459 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 408.6 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.9763461032 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5333333333 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.7333333333 20.7667163134 90% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.46666666667 7.06120827912 134% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204300191831 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0750913781965 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503484311455 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.142170273026 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0362118543305 0.056905535591 64% => OK
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.23 12.4159519038 74% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.