It is difficult for Many people to create a balance between their professional and their personal life. What are the cases of this? What can be done solve this problem?
In this modern era, It is difficult to consider balance is created by masses between their life and their jobs. Some reason are behind it which will be articulated by me with solutions in forthcoming paragraphs.
To begin with, why is tough to make balance in worker’s life? This is because attitude of employers. To elaborate it, many company owners have bad nature which has an influence on employees life like many orders are given by employers to workers for doing a particular work with accurate time then workers have to accept those orders owing to they have be hectic schedule which create inbalance among their life and profession.For example, three decades ago, many protest were being done by work force against a specific France company related accurate timetable of their professiona. To cope with this, behaviour of companies should be changed regarding workforce.
Further more, there is another reason of Monday in the equilibrium Between job and personal life that is luxury life. To explicate it, People prefer to profession over limped off to get promotion for getting better life standard in their future. For example, Canadian companies recently promoted those employees who had been working since its opening. Therefore, more worker spent more time on their profession rather than families. To solve this, Industries should promote those employees who have well experience despite their attendance.
In conclusion, although it is difficult to maintain the balance in workers life with their job, but it has also many solutions which has been mentioned below.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 181, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'employees'' or 'employee's'?
Suggestion: employees'; employee's
...ve bad nature which has an influence on employees life like many orders are given by empl...
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Line 3, column 354, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Use past participle here: 'been'.
Suggestion: been
... accept those orders owing to they have be hectic schedule which create inbalance ...
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Line 3, column 428, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: For
...balance among their life and profession.For example, three decades ago, many protes...
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Line 3, column 460, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun protest seems to be countable; consider using: 'many protests'.
Suggestion: many protests
...fession.For example, three decades ago, many protest were being done by work force against a...
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Line 5, column 364, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'worker' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: worker
...n working since its opening. Therefore, more worker spent more time on their profession rat...
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Line 5, column 505, Rule ID: HAVE_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'experienced'.
Suggestion: experienced
...d promote those employees who have well experience despite their attendance. In conclus...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, regarding, so, then, therefore, well, for example, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1338.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.26771653543 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61254811455 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622047244094 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 110.300599374 49.4020404114 223% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 111.5 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.83333333333 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.34991691619 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125449608339 0.084324248473 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900118394816 0.0667982634062 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.218842179445 0.151304729494 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0458547351753 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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