It is true that people in urban regions are being prone to being couch potatoes
and lazy sloths due to their lack of regular exercise. This can be explained by some
reasons, and solutions can be taken to eliminate the problem.
Two reasons are to blame for this trend. Firstly, the hectic schedule that many
people are having pressurizes them into the maelstrom of work/study and
depriving them of time for sufficient exercise. Children have to occupy themselves
with school assignments and examinations while employees have to attend
frequent meetings with customers to secure contracts. These activities detach
modern people from non-work/study activities and they tend to less prioritize
physical activities. Secondly, people in the cities would lack the facilities to
practice sports or other healthy activities. There are few parks, and if there are
any, there are only some horizontal bars or parallel bars, which are not
adequate to accommodate the needs of every citizen.
Some measures should be taken to address the issue, and schools/companies and
government should provide education or hold social campaigns to yield desirable
outcomes. As for schools, they should be responsible for instilling in children a
sense of health awareness and necessary background health-related knowledge.
For instance, children should be motivated to be proactive in keeping fit and
staying healthy by the inclusion of more physical education classes. Besides,
companies should give their staff more flexi time or sponsor gym membership for
them. As for the governments, they can run some social campaigns to encourage
the citizens to maintain health via TV programmes, banners on the street. As well
as this, more funds should be allocated to the construction of more sports
facilities in the cities.
In conclusion, people have a tendency to do sport or other physical activities less;
however, efforts can be taken by both schools and governments to deal with this
situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, well, while, as for, for instance, in conclusion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49839228296 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93053963831 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.578778135048 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3890093297 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.0 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7333333333 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.46666666667 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 26.0 4.38176352705 593% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 5.01903807615 438% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.128713718442 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0462257772334 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0326014883563 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0351427800782 0.151304729494 23% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451433019923 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.99 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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