In this modern society, many people tend to think that the residents living in big cities cannot work out enough to enhance their physical and mental health. This essay will discuss both causes and possible measures to lessen this phenomenon.
There are a couple of causes why modern citizens are struggling with a lack of physical exercises. First and foremost, many businesses require employees to do overworking over their work time by providing over workload in order to increase productivities in their company's profit. Thus, there is less opportunity for workers to participate in outdoor or indoor activities which allow them to enhance their physical strength as well as mental stability. Besides, the misleading belief that only several subjects related to literature, math and science are more significant than any others at school exert a negative influence on the ignorance of the exercise importance. Therefore, this discourages teenagers from doing physical activities at school by reducing the amount of time for PE classes.
However, as fewer city dwellers allocate their time for exercise, many severe health problems such as obesity increase significantly, which one of the most serious social concerns. For this reason, governments and academic organisations including schools need to collaborate with one another to tackle this issue. First of all, authorities should implement a strict policy regarding the limitation of working hours, which give more opportunities to spend time doing exercise for workers in society by supporting some campaigns associated with well-being and work out programmes. Moreover, schools need to enlarge PE lectures for every student because it will be an effective way to prevent the teenager from overweight issues substantially.
In conclusion, there are various reasons why the general public is in danger of having a lack of physical exercises. However, the efforts of governments and schools can resolve such a social problem with overweight practically.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 50, Rule ID: GENERAL_XX[1]
Message: Use simply 'public'.
Suggestion: public
...sion, there are various reasons why the general public is in danger of having a lack of physic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, first, however, if, moreover, regarding, so, therefore, thus, well, in conclusion, such as, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1711.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.53721682848 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91032631622 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611650485437 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4774088788 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.615384615 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.7692307692 20.7667163134 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.61538461538 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157549787843 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055430367461 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0463868224196 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0919156411927 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405440017686 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 13.0946893788 126% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 12.4159519038 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.99 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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