The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

Essay topics:

The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now, and plans for its development.

The maps illustrate Islip town centre now and its planned improvement.

Overall, it can be seen that the centre of this town will undergo significant changes and developments.

In Islip town centre, where it is based on the countryside area, there are a few infrastructure buildings such as independent shops, a school located in the south-west, a park situated in the east. Besides, several housings are established in the middle of this town with the main roads.

However, according to city development plans, there will have the broader range of social infrastructures and accommodations, which could trigger the town to become an urban city. The town of Islip is expected to be surrounded by a well-organised dual carriageway, and in the middle, there will be a road for pedestrians only with a few shops. Instead of several separated shops, a big shopping centre will be built. Aside from that, new constructions such as a bus station, a carpark and some new styles of houses will be constructed. Additionally, although there will be a park, its size of it would be smaller, while the size of the school is anticipated to be larger.

Votes
Average: 7.8 (1 vote)

Comments

Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, however, if, so, well, while, such as

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 7.0 186% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 1.00243902439 898% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.15609756098 127% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 22.0 33.7804878049 65% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 955.0 965.302439024 99% => OK
No of words: 192.0 196.424390244 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97395833333 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13207099322 2.65546596893 118% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 106.607317073 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588541666667 0.547539520022 107% => OK
syllable_count: 290.7 283.868780488 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8518831331 43.030603864 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.111111111 112.824112599 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3333333333 22.9334400587 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11111111111 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.188076713652 0.215688989381 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998112612121 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.140009901455 0.0843802449381 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183260525255 0.15604864568 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.175518011778 0.0819641961636 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.2329268293 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 11.4140731707 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.87 8.06136585366 110% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 11.4329268293 105% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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